First, thank you for drafting this.  Very nicely done by adding the history.

I have a few very minor editorial suggestions:

1) Place the Title (in blue/underlined) in the header so that it appears on all of the pages.

2) Add page numbers.

3) 4th para. under 'discussion' - lower case the 'H' in the word "However".

SAC,  any other comments.  We really need to get this posted for the 30-day SISO community review.   -Jane


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